Red Oak Academy

    English

    Diagnostic Test (ENG 900)

    Copyright © 2002 Red Oak Academy

    Instructions to the Parents:
    This test covers materials typically presented through the end of the ninth grade.  It is recommended that you print a copy of this test. Then read each item to your child. Record their responses on paper then submit the student responses when the test is completed.   This is not a timed test. 


     
     1.  In the following paragraph, what is the topic sentence?

         Writing is difficult because so many skills are involved. We must
         spell and form words correctly, and we must arrange sentences
         clearly. We must construct paragraphs logically, and we must pull
         paragraphs together so that they work to form a unified piece of
         writing. All these skills require frequent review, careful
         examination, and practice.
     
      a. Writing is difficult because so many skills are involved.
      b. We must spell and form words correctly, and we must
              arrange sentences clearly.
              c. We must construct paragraphs logically, and we must pull
              paragraphs together so that they work to form a unified
              piece of writing.
              d. All these skills require frequent review, careful
              examination, and practice.

    2. Read the following portion of a paragraph and decide which one of
        the sentences would make the best topic sentence.

         Milton was imprisoned for his support of the Commonwealth. He
         had difficulties supporting his large family and yet wrote a brilliant
         epic. In the same way, Bunyan was imprisoned, became
         impoverished, and yet was strengthened to write a great allegory.

              a. John Milton was poor, but wrote a great epic
              b. John Bunyan was poor, but wrote a great allegory.
              c. The puritan writers, John Milton and John Bunyan, had
              much in common.
              d. The writers, John Milton and John Bunyan, had very
              little in common.

    3. Read the following portion of a paragraph and decide which one of
        the four possible answers would make the best topic sentence.

         It may be a participle, which is used only as an adjective. It may
         be a gerund, which always ends in -ing and functions as a noun.
         Finally, it may be an infinitive, which is preceded by to and
         functions as a noun, adjective, or even as an adverb.

              a. Yet verbals still look very much like verbs.
              b. A verbal may belong to one of three categories.
              c. Participles are the most common verbals.
              d. Infinitives are the most common verbals.

    4. Which situation does not require the writer to begin a new
         paragraph?

              a. a change in time
              b. a change in place
              c. a new sentence
              d. a new speaker

     5. The condition that does not necessarily require the writer to
         begin a new paragraph is _____.

              a. a change in subject
              b. an explanation
              c. a different mood
              d. another step

     6. A change from talking to singing would probably be a change
         in _____.

              a. time
              b. speaker
              c. place
              d. action

    7. The method that would not help to connect ideas in sentences
         or paragraphs is to ____.

              a. repeat key words or patterns from previous sentences or
              paragraphs
              b. refer to the topic being discussed with words such as this,
              that, such, and those
              c. use pronouns with antecedents in previous sentences or
              paragraphs
              d. use many periods and no semicolons

    8. The word or phrase that would best introduce an example is  _____.

              a. therefore
              b. in summary
              c. for instance
              d. later
     
    9. The word or phrase that would best show a result or conclusion is _____.

              a. therefore
              b. beneath
              c. too
              d. however

    10. The methods by which a paragraph is developed include  ______.

              a. time, mood, speaker, idea
              b. expository, descriptive, narrative, argumentative
              c. examples, comparisons and contrasts, definitions (or
              explanations), reasons (or arguments)
              d. this, that, these, and those

    11. If you want to write a paragraph which examines two things to
         determine similarities and differences, you will probably develop
         your paragraph by using _____.

              a. examples
              b. comparisons or contrasts
              c. explanations
              d. arguments

    12. The method by which the following paragraph was developed is _____.

          A family album of photographs can be a record as full of
          events and emotions as a diary. Pictures of wedding or
          birthday celebrations can recall through facial expressions
          the hope a sister felt or the pride that a father showed.
          Snapshots of a child at play record an innocent past that will
          never return. Even pictures of animals or plants can tell us
          what we valued or what touched us at the time the pictures
          were taken.

                   a. examples
                   b. comparisons or contrasts
                   c. explanations
                   d. arguments

    13. The main types of prose composition include expository, narrative, persuasive, and _____.

              a. process
              b. illustrative
              c. descriptive
              d. definition
     
    14. The type of writing that is not expository is ______.

              a. recipes
              b. instruction sheets
              c. descriptions
              d. process analysis

    15. What should you do when writing instruction sheets or "how to" articles?

              a. Assume that your instructions are being written for
              someone who is well informed about the process already.
              b. Avoid examples and comparisons because they require
              too much space.
              c. Avoid explaining why steps are necessary since
              explanations would probably be confusing.
              d. Organize the steps carefully according to the order you
              reader will have to use.

    Read the following paragraphs and answer the questions at the end.

    A.
    A stone had smashed into Jimmie's mouth.  Blood was bubbling
    over his chin and down upon his ragged shirt.  Tears made furrows
    on his dirt-stained cheeks.  His thin legs had begun to tremble and
    turn weak, causing his small body to reel.  His roaring curses of
    the first part of the fight had changed to a blasphemous chatter.
    B.
    On the east edge of the Land of Oz, in the Munchkin Country, is a
    big, tall hill called Mount Munch.  One one side, the bottom of this
    hill just touches the Deadly Sandy Desert that separates the
    Fairyland of Oz from all the rest of the world, but on the other
    side, the hill touches the beautiful, fertile Country of the Munchkins.
    C.
    It would appear as though October is the correct month for John Paul's
    birth date as all reliable documents mention it. The year 1912 which
    appears on John Paul's first marriage certificate and on his delayed birth
    certificate, however, cannot be substantiated because the birth record for John Paul in Paducah, Kentucky (his place of birth), was compiled three decades later. Moreover, Twitchell's eating habits left much to be desired.  Nevertheless, these two documents do summarily indicate that the "1922" birth date was a fabrication made years later by Paul, presumably to convince his young wife, Gail, that he was not too much older than herself.

    16.  What is the topic sentence of paragraph A?
    17.  What is the topic sentence of paragraph B?
    18.  What is the topic sentence of paragraph C?
    19.  What is the sentence that does not belong in paragraph C?
    20.  What is the concluding sentence of paragraph A?